#2 Keyshot renders by Tomas
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forgot to add renders files :)
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2014-05-01 19:30:49
#1 Keyshot renders by Tomas
Added new HDR, textures, bumps and specular maps.
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2014-05-01 19:25:41

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Tomas

Designer

Fri, 02 May 2014 09:59:04 +0000
Hey Justin,

Thanks for Your comment and criticism :) This title image is just for this entry, I do not make final composition. It is just a .ksp scenes without photoshop :)
If you have been an art director, then you must know the price of this work. I agree, but not with all of Your comments.

Good luck,

Tomas

BryteWerks

Buyer

Thu, 01 May 2014 22:18:32 +0000
Tomas -

As you read the comments below, please understand that I'm not being mean. I'm just being honest. Hopefully, you can handle direct criticism. What I hope more than anything is that it helps you grow as a digital artist.

These images are not photorealistic. I've been an art director, graphic designer, computer animator and cinematographer for twenty years. Normally, I can offer critiques because small things will help take it to the next level. However, this work is amateur work; it is about a 5 out of 10.

Lighting needs massive improvement. Textures need massive improvement. The glass is a massive step backwards. No one would think these images are photographs. They are obviously virtual objects. Why you choose to put the accessories in the background escapes me; it just clutters the entire image.

Feel free to resubmit but only if you can really step up your game. I'm not your art school. You're already supposed to be capable of delivering professional work. That's what I'm paying for.

- Justin